The Cliffs of Inanity

6 Comments

1. Mario wrote:

   This is something Jack Kerouac would like a lot

   Thursday, April 26, 2007 at 5:52 pm | Permalink
2. Stephen Smoogen wrote:

   Nice. I submit the following patch

   s/ha$/hey$/

   that should make for a slight derivation of feeling.

   Thursday, April 26, 2007 at 8:47 pm | Permalink
3. Frank Ch. Eigler wrote:

   Is it wrong to note that, absent a mention of a season, it’s not haiku proper?

   Thursday, April 26, 2007 at 9:27 pm | Permalink
4. tom wrote:

   Frank — I asked Elyn and she said it is ok if you want to change one of the “ha”s into “spring”.

   Thursday, April 26, 2007 at 10:54 pm | Permalink
5. Roman Kennke wrote:

   Hahaha. Oops. Ha ha ha.

   Friday, April 27, 2007 at 6:57 am | Permalink
6. elyn tromey wrote:

   Frank is pedantic
   In spring, summer, winter, fall
   Still, he’s consistent.

   Friday, April 27, 2007 at 10:52 pm | Permalink

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