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Elyn wrote a haiku the other day:

Ha ha ha ha ha
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
Ha ha ha ha ha

6 Comments

  1. Mario wrote:

    This is something Jack Kerouac would like a lot :)

    Thursday, April 26, 2007 at 5:52 pm | Permalink
  2. Nice. I submit the following patch

    s/ha$/hey$/

    that should make for a slight derivation of feeling.

    Thursday, April 26, 2007 at 8:47 pm | Permalink
  3. Frank Ch. Eigler wrote:

    Is it wrong to note that, absent a mention of a season, it’s not haiku proper?

    Thursday, April 26, 2007 at 9:27 pm | Permalink
  4. tom wrote:

    Frank — I asked Elyn and she said it is ok if you want to change one of the “ha”s into “spring”.

    Thursday, April 26, 2007 at 10:54 pm | Permalink
  5. Roman Kennke wrote:

    Hahaha. Oops. Ha ha ha.

    Friday, April 27, 2007 at 6:57 am | Permalink
  6. elyn tromey wrote:

    Frank is pedantic
    In spring, summer, winter, fall
    Still, he’s consistent.

    Friday, April 27, 2007 at 10:52 pm | Permalink

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