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  • This is something Jack Kerouac would like a lot :)

  • Nice. I submit the following patch

    s/ha$/hey$/

    that should make for a slight derivation of feeling.

  • Is it wrong to note that, absent a mention of a season, it’s not haiku proper?

  • Frank — I asked Elyn and she said it is ok if you want to change one of the “ha”s into “spring”.

  • Hahaha. Oops. Ha ha ha.

  • Frank is pedantic
    In spring, summer, winter, fall
    Still, he’s consistent.

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